First Lines: Epilogue

While cracking the covers of well-loved, read-only-once, and couldn’t-stand-this books for my First Lines series, I wondered…

How does this work? First lines, I mean. First paragraphs, sentences, pages. What are authors thinking?

I’ve got to kill it with this opening or else…

Or is it a little less sinister? Like, I want to hook the reader but, really, I’ve got a whole novel to show off my mad skills—the first page doesn’t have to be memorable, only the story does.

Or maybe simply: I suppose the beginning should be good but, eh, I like ‘She ate a piece of bread.’ and I’m keeping it.

The words that introduce you to a new character or bring you into a new world…how important are they?

Some books are so well-known that it doesn’t matter as much because, when you pick up Lord of the Rings, you know it’s going to be a fantasy. When you grab Hunger Games, you know it’s Dystopian. But authors generally don’t know their book will be famous when they write it. Well, excluding Stephen King.

Who? Exactly.

So, back to non-rock-star-authors. What are they feeling as they sit down to type that very first line? As a YA author, for instance, do they feel the need to bring readers into their world right away? Let them know the story won’t be taking place at South Mundane High School on Main Street?

Maybe it’s not the age group as much as the genre: dystopian, science fiction, fantasy… Or perhaps it’s not the age group or genre but the person writing the book. Rules, tips, and advice aside, writing is an individual sport.

Whatever the process, however the pages come about, I’m glad they do. Because I love reading them. How would I cope in a world without books? I don’t even want to think about it. It’s creepy. And wrong. Like a world without cheese.

So, while I’m obsessed with passionate about first lines, and while I collect them and read them over and over and write them down (or highlight them in e-books), I’ve read stunning first lines and hated the book. Also, I continue reading even if the first lines don’t knock it out of the park. After all, one of my favorite books of all time begins, “Once there were four children whose names were Peter, Susan, Edmund, and Lucy.”


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First Lines: Picture Books

9 thoughts on “First Lines: Epilogue

  1. Sarah, this has been a great series. I really enjoyed it. I love that opening to the Narnia series, and I think it’s great that you are so passionate about opening lines. It makes me want to take more notice when I read. I’ll be checking out some of my past loves to see how they rate. 🙂 And like you, I can’t imagine a world without books, but even before there were books, there were stories … and that’s what it’s all about, isn’t it?

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    • Thanks, Norah. It’s fun to check out old favorites to see how they rate in the First Lines department. Also interesting to pick up books you didn’t particularly like to see that they have a smashing first line. It’s a wacky world. But one with stories. That I can live with. 🙂

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  2. “Like a world without cheese.” *laugh* I share your feelings of desperation when considering a world without the written word. The best way to punish me as a kid was to tell me I couldn’t read. My mother tells me I’d start reading the back of cereal boxes in desperation.

    I’m going to have to pay more attention to first lines. I think that I tend to give the author the courtesy of a first paragraph, or first page to see if they can hook me. And if not…. well… there’s a lot of pressure for those first words!

    Speaking of Peter, Susan, Edmund and Lucy… in our house they’re about to go into battle against the White Witch. Munchkin finally got hooked by the story and I’m *thrilled.* And I’m so happy there’s 6 more books to go!

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    • I remember reading cereal boxes. They could be quite entertaining. 🙂

      Firsts, for me, come in the form of first lines, paragraphs, pages, even chapters. I sometimes give them two chapters but I have a really large TBR pile so I move on. I often go back to the book later — just in case.

      Yay for Narnia! 😀

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